My coming of age book is called To Kill A Mockingbird by Harper Lee. The topic i'm focusing on in this book is how racism affects the character. Racism is a very big topic and can mean many things ;like it can mean discrimination , or abusive behavior towards members of another race. In my book i'm focusing on the raction and emotions my character has when racism to brought up . I don't think that rasicm is right and it can hurt people's feelings really badly. Racism shouldn't be used to hurt each other but can be used as a way to teach people how we are different from each other in a good way.
The main character is Jean Louise Finch ,usually called by her nickname Scout in the book. She lives in Maycomb with her father ;which they usually just call Atticus and her brother. Her father works as a lawyer and is working on a case ; Atticus is helping to defend Tom Robinson a black male that raped Bob Ewell a white women. That's how the theme of racism is coming to be. Atticus actions made the community he was living in very dissapointed.
In school Cecil Jacobs a student announced in the schoolyard that Scout's dad defended niggers. Scout denied it and asked Jem what did Cecil mean. Scout's reaction towards this announcement was angryment because in the book it described how Scout's fist were clenched and was ready to let fly . But thankfully she held it back; Atticus said he would wear her out .
That evening Scout went home asking her father about the situation.
"Do you defend niggers, Atticus?" I asked him.
"Of course I do. Don't say niggers, Scout. That's common."
I think that Atticus is trying to teach Scout an important lesson , the lesson that is easy to realize ;is that the word nigger isn't very polite, and shouldn't be used to describe someone that is another race.
Scout was too young at that time to understand why her father was defending a negro . So this is what Atticus explained to her daughter.
"I'm simply defending a Negro...For a number of reasons ; The main one is, if i don't I couldn't hold up my head in town , I couldn't represent this country in the legislature, I couldn't even tell you or Jem not to do something again."
Atticus Knows that they won't win the case because Tom is black . Totally unfair. People shouldn't be judged by their skin color or where their are from. I'm sure Atticus is helping him for a reason. Maybe he is innocent . I'm sure Atticus is not the type of person that helps a black if he raped the white girl on purpose.
Chirstmas finally is arriving in Maycomb bringing disaters with it along the way. Francis , Scout's cousin was annoying her in the dinner room . This is what happened...
"I ain't botherin' you," I said
Francis concluded that I had been sufficiently subdued, and crooned softly, "Nigger-Lover.."
I guess Scout was tired of all this nigger stuff and couldn't hold back her anger. "This time, I split my knuckle to the bone on his front teeth.My left impaired , I sailed in with my right, but not for long." Scout still dosen't know what Nigger- lover meant but by the aditude Francis had , she knew he was saying something bad about her father. An important conversation that Scout and her dad had after the fight was :
"You aren't really a nigger-lover,then,are you?"(scout)
"I certainly am.I do my best to love everybody...I'm hard put,sometimes-baby, It's never an insult to be called what somebody thinks is a bad name.It just shows you how poor that person is, it doesn't hurt you."(Atticus). Atticus is confindent in what he is doing, and i think when he says i do my best to love everybody , he means that you can love anyone ,and it wouldn't matter what skin or culture that person is from.
Rasicm can cause injury and hate. It's simple when you just say Nigger but if you consider what the person receiving feels; it's more than that. Not simple but confused and hurt. The term Nigger is the most offensive word in english as of now. Also a big part of Rasicm , it is used to discriminate black people or people that are dark colored skin. So far, what i read in To Kill A Mockingbird ; People or neighbors that made fun of Scout's dad used Nigger . Life is not about hurting people is about loving and learning to appreicate diversity .
Tuesday, May 24, 2011
Friday, May 20, 2011
Coming of Age Writing:
Commands that my parents have for me , that i agree or disagree:
-everyday when my mom comes home from work , and i didn't finish cleaning up the house or the dishes she would get mad. *Disagree, I don't want to do the chores because i have my own things to do like my homework or read my books. i think it is REALLY unfair becuae my brother that is one year younger than my has NEVER touch the dishes before. He is mostly the person that makes the house very dorty and i have to clean after him.
-When i ask my parents too many questions are when i have too many comments to make they tell me get out if here(room). *Disagree, What if i had something important to discuss with them about, they shouldn't ignore me like that . Makes me feel unwanted.
-My parents yell at me when i yell at my other little brother that is like 8 years old . * Disagree , they shouldn't yell at me , they should yell at him. I only yell at my little brother because of the stupid things he do and troubles he causes me . Not fair.
-everyday when my mom comes home from work , and i didn't finish cleaning up the house or the dishes she would get mad. *Disagree, I don't want to do the chores because i have my own things to do like my homework or read my books. i think it is REALLY unfair becuae my brother that is one year younger than my has NEVER touch the dishes before. He is mostly the person that makes the house very dorty and i have to clean after him.
-When i ask my parents too many questions are when i have too many comments to make they tell me get out if here(room). *Disagree, What if i had something important to discuss with them about, they shouldn't ignore me like that . Makes me feel unwanted.
-My parents yell at me when i yell at my other little brother that is like 8 years old . * Disagree , they shouldn't yell at me , they should yell at him. I only yell at my little brother because of the stupid things he do and troubles he causes me . Not fair.
Coming of Age Writing:
14. What are some questions and concerns you have about growing up and adulthood ?
* A concern i have about growing up is that , my mom told me that when i am 18 years old i have to move out and work to take care of myself. And it is one of my concerns because i am scared of begin alone.
*Another concern i have about growing up is on cooking food for myself. As of right now i only know how to boil water , cook eggs and noddles. I don't want to just eat those everyday when i grow up so , i want to learn how to cook more delilious food for myself . It's too bad my parents are always too busy with their work to teach me. So that is a concern i have about my health when i am grwoing up.
* A question i have to go with my first concern is that , Is working very tiring? From my point of view i think working is easy (kind of ... i think) but my parents are always saying it is very tiring.
* Question: What type of reponsiblites do i have when i am grwoing up? Will it be something hard , and i can't handle it?
* Question: why do alot of adults want to be kids again ?
* A concern i have about growing up is that , my mom told me that when i am 18 years old i have to move out and work to take care of myself. And it is one of my concerns because i am scared of begin alone.
*Another concern i have about growing up is on cooking food for myself. As of right now i only know how to boil water , cook eggs and noddles. I don't want to just eat those everyday when i grow up so , i want to learn how to cook more delilious food for myself . It's too bad my parents are always too busy with their work to teach me. So that is a concern i have about my health when i am grwoing up.
* A question i have to go with my first concern is that , Is working very tiring? From my point of view i think working is easy (kind of ... i think) but my parents are always saying it is very tiring.
* Question: What type of reponsiblites do i have when i am grwoing up? Will it be something hard , and i can't handle it?
* Question: why do alot of adults want to be kids again ?
Tuesday, April 26, 2011
Final Reading Response
Susan Zheng 810
The book I'm writing my reading response on is called This is Me From now on by Barbara Dee. I'm writing about this book because it has many real life topics to discuss. And I can connect to these topics because I have friends too. The main character in this book is Evie ,and she faces many friendship trouble along the way. I think everyone might have gone through some issues if you have friends. Evie has two best friends Nisha and Lily. They spent most of their afternoon times in Lily's bedroom eating Pringles , and taking personality quizzes from enormous stacks of magazines that Lily borrowed from her cousin. I think that's one of the problems that Evie has with her friends, she doesn't even like eating Pringles in Lily's house. I think Evie should speak up for herself and not follow them to please them. That's what friends are for , they can listen to your ideas on how to spent the rest of afternoon and give you some suggestions.
Friends share secrets like Evie does with her friends . They all know that Evie has a crush on Zane a boy in her class for 3 years.Like me and my friends always tell each other secrets like problems in our family , and test grades. We always would have something to tell each other so that we know everything about each other. Their friendship connection is strong or else I wouldn't think Evie would share anything personal to them . But friendship relationships can get really complicated when a new neighborhood moves in next door to Evie's house.
The new girl that just moved in is sitting in Evie's kitchen table chatting with her mom. The second thought that comes to Evie's mine when she see's her is "Whoa. That girl looks incredible. I wish my hair was long and all wavy like that, and my eyes were that smoky sort of green. And I bet SHE doesn't have trouble finding a bathing suit" , her third though was "she's crazy." That's when her mom suggest Evie to show Francesca around the neighborhood. Evie finds Francesaca weird because of her clothes , it looks like she is going to a costume party. But as Evie' s relationship with Francesaca grows closer and closer she learns that she is wild and funny and the only rules she follows are the ones that she invents herself.
On the other hand as Nisha and Lily meet Francesca they dislike her . So now Evie's relationship with them are very complicated . On a history project you can only have two partners in a group , and since there are three of them Nisha and Lily paired up. Leaving Evie only one choice , Francesca . At first Evie doesn't trust Francesca because she was a liar and wore weird costumes. But she decided to give her a try and work with her in the history project. That's when things go wrong, Nisha tries to rescue Evie from Francesca because she thinks that they actually don't want to work together.
This is the point of view from Evie in the book : I stared back at her. "Oh, yeah ," I muttered.
"The doctor appointment. Actually , Nisha , I rescheduled that."
"Are you sure you should have?"
"Uh-huh. Definitely."
"Because you were feeling so sick before . Weren't you?"
Okay, this was going way too far. Obviously, I knew I should have been grateful of her helping me. But was she going to stand here and insist that I dump Francesca in front of everyone? And also act like I couldn't make a decision for myself?
"Well , I'm fine now."
I think what Evie did was correct , ever since she meet Francesca I think she changed. In the beginning of the book Evie usually doesn't say anything that's why Nisha thinks that Evie can't make the decision for herself. Which also isn’t wrong because she was trying to help her friend out. But now Evie is speaking up for herself which is a nice change. Because Evie is deciding to make friends with Francesca her feelings are hurt by her friends. "I went upstairs , surprised and hurt that my best friends were refusing to wait for me, even if Francesca would be tagging along." In school Nisha avoided eye contact with Evie when she was trying to smile back at her because Evie noticed that Nisha was peeking at her. I think Evie tried her best . If Nisha is ignoring her I think the best thing to do is explain what her feelings are. Now Evie's relationship with Nisha and Lily are growing farther and farther apart.
Evie made a right choice in the beginning of the book , choosing to be friends with Francesca. Francesca is not a selfish person and when she sees Evie very sad, she convince Evie to be friends with Nisha and Lily. That way Evie now has three best friends. Except the relationship between Nisha/Lily and Francesca needs to get closer. And the book ends with a very happy ending . I grabbed my cell phone and my bubble gum, and checked to make sure my amber necklace was clasped tightly around my neck. Then all four of us ran down the steps and out the door into the freezing sunshine.To make friends you shouldn't judge people by the way they dress. or force your friend to make a decision which friends they want to be with. There will always be a way to figure things out . Friendship should last a long time , it's about trust and sharing .
The book I'm writing my reading response on is called This is Me From now on by Barbara Dee. I'm writing about this book because it has many real life topics to discuss. And I can connect to these topics because I have friends too. The main character in this book is Evie ,and she faces many friendship trouble along the way. I think everyone might have gone through some issues if you have friends. Evie has two best friends Nisha and Lily. They spent most of their afternoon times in Lily's bedroom eating Pringles , and taking personality quizzes from enormous stacks of magazines that Lily borrowed from her cousin. I think that's one of the problems that Evie has with her friends, she doesn't even like eating Pringles in Lily's house. I think Evie should speak up for herself and not follow them to please them. That's what friends are for , they can listen to your ideas on how to spent the rest of afternoon and give you some suggestions.
Friends share secrets like Evie does with her friends . They all know that Evie has a crush on Zane a boy in her class for 3 years.Like me and my friends always tell each other secrets like problems in our family , and test grades. We always would have something to tell each other so that we know everything about each other. Their friendship connection is strong or else I wouldn't think Evie would share anything personal to them . But friendship relationships can get really complicated when a new neighborhood moves in next door to Evie's house.
The new girl that just moved in is sitting in Evie's kitchen table chatting with her mom. The second thought that comes to Evie's mine when she see's her is "Whoa. That girl looks incredible. I wish my hair was long and all wavy like that, and my eyes were that smoky sort of green. And I bet SHE doesn't have trouble finding a bathing suit" , her third though was "she's crazy." That's when her mom suggest Evie to show Francesca around the neighborhood. Evie finds Francesaca weird because of her clothes , it looks like she is going to a costume party. But as Evie' s relationship with Francesaca grows closer and closer she learns that she is wild and funny and the only rules she follows are the ones that she invents herself.
On the other hand as Nisha and Lily meet Francesca they dislike her . So now Evie's relationship with them are very complicated . On a history project you can only have two partners in a group , and since there are three of them Nisha and Lily paired up. Leaving Evie only one choice , Francesca . At first Evie doesn't trust Francesca because she was a liar and wore weird costumes. But she decided to give her a try and work with her in the history project. That's when things go wrong, Nisha tries to rescue Evie from Francesca because she thinks that they actually don't want to work together.
This is the point of view from Evie in the book : I stared back at her. "Oh, yeah ," I muttered.
"The doctor appointment. Actually , Nisha , I rescheduled that."
"Are you sure you should have?"
"Uh-huh. Definitely."
"Because you were feeling so sick before . Weren't you?"
Okay, this was going way too far. Obviously, I knew I should have been grateful of her helping me. But was she going to stand here and insist that I dump Francesca in front of everyone? And also act like I couldn't make a decision for myself?
"Well , I'm fine now."
I think what Evie did was correct , ever since she meet Francesca I think she changed. In the beginning of the book Evie usually doesn't say anything that's why Nisha thinks that Evie can't make the decision for herself. Which also isn’t wrong because she was trying to help her friend out. But now Evie is speaking up for herself which is a nice change. Because Evie is deciding to make friends with Francesca her feelings are hurt by her friends. "I went upstairs , surprised and hurt that my best friends were refusing to wait for me, even if Francesca would be tagging along." In school Nisha avoided eye contact with Evie when she was trying to smile back at her because Evie noticed that Nisha was peeking at her. I think Evie tried her best . If Nisha is ignoring her I think the best thing to do is explain what her feelings are. Now Evie's relationship with Nisha and Lily are growing farther and farther apart.
Evie made a right choice in the beginning of the book , choosing to be friends with Francesca. Francesca is not a selfish person and when she sees Evie very sad, she convince Evie to be friends with Nisha and Lily. That way Evie now has three best friends. Except the relationship between Nisha/Lily and Francesca needs to get closer. And the book ends with a very happy ending . I grabbed my cell phone and my bubble gum, and checked to make sure my amber necklace was clasped tightly around my neck. Then all four of us ran down the steps and out the door into the freezing sunshine.To make friends you shouldn't judge people by the way they dress. or force your friend to make a decision which friends they want to be with. There will always be a way to figure things out . Friendship should last a long time , it's about trust and sharing .
Tuesday, March 22, 2011
Sonnet-
The plane greatly slides through the blue yonder,
and the dense big gray clouds float in the air,
millions, thousands of happy wonders,
on the way to the biggest dare,
The season summer is vacation time
faces of relatives,and grandparents
Passing through the history in a dime
The big walls, my big bedroom and my aunt.
So dark, quiet and always depending
Few cars, old buildings like the ancient days
Dark ocean flowing never quite ending
No high technology and big payments.
The things in my hometown is what i see,
Summer is time to be a happy spree.
and the dense big gray clouds float in the air,
millions, thousands of happy wonders,
on the way to the biggest dare,
The season summer is vacation time
faces of relatives,and grandparents
Passing through the history in a dime
The big walls, my big bedroom and my aunt.
So dark, quiet and always depending
Few cars, old buildings like the ancient days
Dark ocean flowing never quite ending
No high technology and big payments.
The things in my hometown is what i see,
Summer is time to be a happy spree.
Wednesday, March 9, 2011
Reading Response To Independent Reading Book- edited
The book i'm reading is called " This Is ME From Now On", the author of this book is Barbara Dee. This book interests me because this book on friendship and mainly how to deal with it. Every one has friends and sometimes will have times when they will have fights or diagree on something.
The main character in this book is named Evie. She has two best friends Nisha and Lily , and they been very good friends from third grade. They always share secrets and crushes, but when a new girl moves into the neighborhood things between them are differnt. They began spliting into groups of two, when it was suppose to be a group of three best friends.
At first glance of the new girl ;Evie, Nisha and lily all thought she was a werid girl because of the way she dressed. They all disliked her. On the first day of school the history teacher assigns a huge research project for the class. The maximum amount of people in a gruop is two . This question really stuned the three friends. They couldn't decide who would work with who , because there would be one working alone. The finally decision didn't include Evie , so the only choice she had to make was if she wanted to work with the new girl that moved in .Her name is Francesca Of course she wanted to work with her.
The relationship with Francesca didn't work out with Evie in the beginning . But since it been weeks since Nisha and Lily had hanged out with Evie , Evie feels very lonely and starts to get a closer relationship with Francesca . When Evie wants to share something she dosent go to Nisha or Lily because thye are too busy working on the project. Evie and Francessa didnt have a primary source yet and it was stating to worry Evie. Francesca make Evie very uncomforable , Evie doesnt know what to beleive and what to believe.
Francesca decides to invite Evie to her aunt far away to play for a few days while they work on the project. They began sharing secrets and also have their own secrets from Nisha and Lily. I think Evie , Nisha and lily are growing more and more farther apart.
In school when they finally have the time to see each other Evie and Nisha got into a fight. Lily is on Nisha's side. Nisha found out that Evie have secrets that she wouldnt tell her . So now they are in a fight. Evie minds dosnt know what to do .
Friendship is about trust , after building that trust between Evie and Francessa they also became good friends. Francessa doesnt want to see her friend Evie hurt so she tells Evie to make up with her friends before the problem becomes bigger and they will never be able to forgive each other. After listening to her friend's advice Evie takes the chance. Even though it was hard to think of what to say to them they were united. But the problem was will Nisha and Lily accept Francesca into their group. Well i guess they will until they havr trust in each other and i hope it won't take long .
The main character in this book is named Evie. She has two best friends Nisha and Lily , and they been very good friends from third grade. They always share secrets and crushes, but when a new girl moves into the neighborhood things between them are differnt. They began spliting into groups of two, when it was suppose to be a group of three best friends.
At first glance of the new girl ;Evie, Nisha and lily all thought she was a werid girl because of the way she dressed. They all disliked her. On the first day of school the history teacher assigns a huge research project for the class. The maximum amount of people in a gruop is two . This question really stuned the three friends. They couldn't decide who would work with who , because there would be one working alone. The finally decision didn't include Evie , so the only choice she had to make was if she wanted to work with the new girl that moved in .Her name is Francesca Of course she wanted to work with her.
The relationship with Francesca didn't work out with Evie in the beginning . But since it been weeks since Nisha and Lily had hanged out with Evie , Evie feels very lonely and starts to get a closer relationship with Francesca . When Evie wants to share something she dosent go to Nisha or Lily because thye are too busy working on the project. Evie and Francessa didnt have a primary source yet and it was stating to worry Evie. Francesca make Evie very uncomforable , Evie doesnt know what to beleive and what to believe.
Francesca decides to invite Evie to her aunt far away to play for a few days while they work on the project. They began sharing secrets and also have their own secrets from Nisha and Lily. I think Evie , Nisha and lily are growing more and more farther apart.
In school when they finally have the time to see each other Evie and Nisha got into a fight. Lily is on Nisha's side. Nisha found out that Evie have secrets that she wouldnt tell her . So now they are in a fight. Evie minds dosnt know what to do .
Friendship is about trust , after building that trust between Evie and Francessa they also became good friends. Francessa doesnt want to see her friend Evie hurt so she tells Evie to make up with her friends before the problem becomes bigger and they will never be able to forgive each other. After listening to her friend's advice Evie takes the chance. Even though it was hard to think of what to say to them they were united. But the problem was will Nisha and Lily accept Francesca into their group. Well i guess they will until they havr trust in each other and i hope it won't take long .
Wednesday, March 2, 2011
Choose 3 Blogs That are awesome:
#1-Melody Wallace
I think that her blog is very thoughtful because in her writing she would write what she thinks about a certain thing, like for example her reading response to "photograph of the girl" she wrote :" It stinks because while going through puberty you get hungry and thirsty all the time . And it sucks. I don't know how it feels to feel hungry and thirsty." I like how she is honest with everything and says stuff like i don't know how it feels. Another thing that i liked about melody's blog is that she makes her writing fun , like for the poems she would struture it in a unique way to make her poem look more interesting for other readers to read.
#2- Serina
I though that serina's blog was very colorful , which i think is very intresting . She uses color not just to make her blog very pretty but she use it to make powerful or meaningful words stand out by coloring thing with another color or making them capital letters to make those words stand out . Like for the " I have a dream poem" she capitalizes : FREE AT LAST! , THANK GOD ALMIGHTY and WE ARE FREE AT LAST. which i think is very correct because that's the main message that Mr luther King wants everyone to know that we all want to be free. In her blog for poems i could tell that she uses lots of repetition in the poem Why , which i think is very unique. She uses the word why so that much that it makes you think why?. And she uses many question marks with the why like she is asking someone.
#3- Nurshat
I like how nurshat's blog is very detailed and i could tell that she worked very hard on every blog post she made , because all of them are very long. She even includes a note saying that everyone's blog is very unique and interesting in their own ways which i though was very nice and in her writing about other people's blog i could tell she really pay attention to the writer's writng because she wrote: all of his writng is full of passion, ideas and has a very clear focus . And in her writng she also uses really advanced vocabulary like the word seizure , dominant. I also noticed that her blog posts uses very meaningful and amazing words to describe another person's blog, like she uses deep and dark, enthralling visual picture. But i really like how Nurshat takes alot of time to make her blog very good.
I think that her blog is very thoughtful because in her writing she would write what she thinks about a certain thing, like for example her reading response to "photograph of the girl" she wrote :" It stinks because while going through puberty you get hungry and thirsty all the time . And it sucks. I don't know how it feels to feel hungry and thirsty." I like how she is honest with everything and says stuff like i don't know how it feels. Another thing that i liked about melody's blog is that she makes her writing fun , like for the poems she would struture it in a unique way to make her poem look more interesting for other readers to read.
#2- Serina
I though that serina's blog was very colorful , which i think is very intresting . She uses color not just to make her blog very pretty but she use it to make powerful or meaningful words stand out by coloring thing with another color or making them capital letters to make those words stand out . Like for the " I have a dream poem" she capitalizes : FREE AT LAST! , THANK GOD ALMIGHTY and WE ARE FREE AT LAST. which i think is very correct because that's the main message that Mr luther King wants everyone to know that we all want to be free. In her blog for poems i could tell that she uses lots of repetition in the poem Why , which i think is very unique. She uses the word why so that much that it makes you think why?. And she uses many question marks with the why like she is asking someone.
#3- Nurshat
I like how nurshat's blog is very detailed and i could tell that she worked very hard on every blog post she made , because all of them are very long. She even includes a note saying that everyone's blog is very unique and interesting in their own ways which i though was very nice and in her writing about other people's blog i could tell she really pay attention to the writer's writng because she wrote: all of his writng is full of passion, ideas and has a very clear focus . And in her writng she also uses really advanced vocabulary like the word seizure , dominant. I also noticed that her blog posts uses very meaningful and amazing words to describe another person's blog, like she uses deep and dark, enthralling visual picture. But i really like how Nurshat takes alot of time to make her blog very good.
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